Reflection

For this mouth I learn about how to tell story at my ESL class. The unit is about spoken. I use story bird to help and make a story. the hardest part is when i write the story bird because my picture is all different so is very hard for me to make it into a story.The easy part is when i record m y sound to garage band.The important thing that you have to remember is that you have to speck clearly and use expression when you telling to other. i felt nerves when i record my story to garage band cause this is my first time telling a story with a expression. I think that telling story is more fun cause people can pas the story again to people who never hear it. if reading a book is more tired  cause we read it from paper. I in joy the part when i edit my sound at the garage band cause is making my sound better.

My first Podcast

 This is my first podcast,please make comment

One night Rendy’s dad told him a story about knights, sharks, and Santa Claus because he always fought with his sister who was stronger...

Once a upon a time there was a white knight who defeated a legendary dragon all by himself. In the land of Mystery every knight had their own shark for spying on other knights. One day, a white shark argued with a black shark because his white knight defeated the dragon.

“Your knight is weak,” laughed the white shark.
Then the black shark respond, “No my friend, it was the black knight who killed the dragon. You ugly shark.”
 “No my friend not you,” whispered the white shark. Neither of the sharks was at the battle so they didn’t know what happened.
“ Don’t make me mad I can tell my knight to tell his army to kill you.”
 “Okay if you can,” the black shark answered.

They started to go back to their headquarters. Around ten pm the black knight went to the white headquarters and started a war, so he could prove that he was the strongest knight in the world.

 Then suddenly an arrow strike from the sky! The white knight went down and held up his shield as the arrow hit it. He came very close to dying.
"I will kill you," said the black knight. The white knight was in a trap.  He couldn’t go anywhere. After a couple of minutes he shouted, “I wish we were not fighting.”

Then suddenly Santa Clause came and granted their wishes to come true. They suddenly transform into a bear and a lion baby.  Then the Santa Clause jet suddenly fell down. After the jet crashed the Santa Clause skated on the ice. He did not see what was in front of him. Then the shark ate the Santa Clause too bad.

storybird reflection

Few days ago I stared to make a project at ESL. The project is to make a story from Storybird.  The first step to make a story from a story bird is to find the picture first. My teacher called Mr.Raisdana told me to use story bird because story bird provide us with picture. The picture from story bird give us an idea to make a nice story just when we look at the picture. After I finish finding image I started to created 15 slides for my stories.The next step was add the text to each slide. It kinda boring because we have to wright so many thing. Thirdly we have to edit the dialogue and adjectives to are story.After we edit the dialogue and adjectives we took a screanshots  to each image and copied the text to a word doc. lastly  we past it to a big color paper and added sensory language= smell,sound,,touch feeling.

I enjoy this project because is fun and I learn a new software.
The easiest thing to do at the project is when i added the dialogue ,adjective and sreanshot.

Introduction

Hi, My name is Melvin. I come from Indonesia. My favorite sports are soccer,swimming, and basket ball. This is my first blog. I go to school at Sinaramas World Academy.